A character drawing

This is a character for a major story verse I have been working on since 2007 or 2008. I don't know what to call it yet but it has nothing o do with the short story I'm currently writing. Anyways this is one the main characters of my story verse, whom is based on me.

A Christian short story: part two

Part Two

Rohan woke up bright and early and headed to the kitchen to have breakfast: a delicious orange Danish, pomegranate, a couple sausages and milk.  

He then took a shower dried off and got dressed. Then went to check on the girl he brought in last night.

She was still sleeping. So he left the room and asked Hannah look out for her.

"Of course I will."

Rohan thanks her and takes off to his job as a professor.

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Ella was dreaming a nice one of being with her mother .until fire came and then many voices of evil crucified her esteem with vocabulary unbearable. She woke up and realized she was in a place unknown to her. She had forgotten about last night until it came back to her: Ella was about to shoot herself until something whacked her on the head. She thought she had been kidnapped!

Until a woman in her 40s with brown hair a slight pudge, and Amber eyes came into the room. She was wearing a lovely Aqua ruffle sundress with a rope belt.

"Finally you're awake!"

"Who are you? where am I? Did you kidnap me?" 

"Oh child, relax. My name is Hannah and I'm not going to hurt you. Now are you hungry? I have breakfast ready for you."

Ella was frightened and afraid of this strange but compassionate woman. And hid under the bed sheets.

Hannah came over, sat on the bed.

"What's your name? You aren't in trouble. You can trust me."

Ella decided not to ignore the kindness this woman was giving.

"Ella. My name is Ella."

"A very beatiful name. Nice to meet you Ella. Now are you hungry"

"Yes please I'm famished."

"Then follow me."

Hannah stood up and stretched out her hand for Ella.

Ella unhesitatingly grabbed it and Hannah helped her up. And they went downstairs to eat.

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Ella was finally stuffed and her belly showed it. Hannah was busy putting away the food and cleanin the dishes

"Thank you ma'am. This was delicious."

"Your very welcome. By the way how is your head feeling?"

Ella's face froze with fear. And got up and ran out the door with discreet. 

"Ella? Are you there?"

She looked at the table and realized she must have ran off!

"Oh no! I must have unintentionally frightened her! I have to find her!"

Hannah threw on some running shoes and quickly ran to find Ella!

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Ella was getting very exhausted and ready to pass out. She was very out of shape and her legs were sore. So she decided to sit and rest for a moment. And she soon fell asleep.

Until someone called her name and was shaking her, forcing her awake.

It was Hannah!

Ella jumped up and pushed her away.

"stay away from me!"

"I'm sorry I frightened you. My husband followed last night because he was looking out for you. And stopped you from killing hourself!"

"Why? I have done so much bad I don't deserve to live!"

Ella's eyes welled up with tears and the poor girl fell on her knees and cried.

Why am I still alive? I shouldn't be, she thought to herself.

Hannah came up to her and put her arms around her. And put her hand on Ella's head.

"Sssshhh. It's ok. You are not alone. Please don't leave. I wish for you to stay a while. If you're ok with that."

Ella stopped crying.

"Do you mean it?"

"Yes."

"I don't know."

"I don't know about what wrongs you have done, but I refuse to allow you to beat yourself up about it."

Ella thought about it. How can these people refuse to judge me?,  she wondered, but I have no where to go. So what do I have to lose?

"Ok. I will stay for a few days, but do you have any different clothes?" 

Hannah chuckled.

"Oh Ella, let's go get something to for you to wear."

"I think that's pushing it."

"Nonsense."

The two ladies walked back to the house and drove to a nearby small strip mall to get some clothes for Ella. Then headed back home.

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Rohan was very eager to get back home to check on the mysterious girl he saved last night. Besides work was pretty slow. He was trying to teach about Christianity at the university but couldn't focus. 

He was glad when it was time to go and that the weekend was coming up. It would give him a chance to talk with the girl.

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He headed home which took longer because of a blasted accident. After three hours he arrived home and walked in.

"Honey I'm home!"

Hannah ran to her hubby with a hug and kiss.

"Hello! How was your day?"

Rohan sighed.

"Boring. I couldn't stop thinking about last night."

But he soon perked up.

"Speaking of which, how is she?"

"You didn't get my texts?"

"Oops. I didn't check my phone. But how is she?"

"She's doing well. She's helping me with dinner." 

"Do you think she will be willing to talk?"

"I'm unsure. Just chose what you say carefully, because I accidentally sent her running earlier."

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The Homesman Review

"The Homesman" Review

Man, was this western a really stupid, depressing piece of garbage!!!! It was very interesting but had extreme disturbing things that forced me to cover my eyes so the scenes would not be embedded in my head!  What really sucks was the first half of the movie was promising! In fact, I felt like I was watching a Coen Brothers movie (a Coen Brothers movie usually has weird elements and very interesting and unforgettable side characters). But then it all goes downhill. I really don't want to talk about the plot because it gets confusing with subplots and I got so bored with it I could not watch anymore of it. 

What a waste of talent Tommy! The cast and acting was excellent. But it has some really dumb twists and immoral moments. I give it zero stars out of four! 

Worst films I saw in the theatre!

Divergent- felt like a "hunger games" ripoff. Plus I don't like Ashley Judd. And Kate Winslet was so one dimensional!

Monsters University-I wanted a sequel to monsters inc., not a prequel! It felt very unwelcome, despite the good comedy. 

Hotel Transylvania - a very predictable corny and lame animated comedy about the infamous universal studios monsters.

Hancock- an unfunny superhero film. Don't want to go into more detail. 

Five years of engagement- a film that was pretty lame and had scenes that really made me uncomfortable.

That's my boy-the most inappropriate film mankind has made!! Damn it Adam sandler!! How could stoop to such a low? It's disgusting and immoral!

Transformers Revenge of the Fallen- a good marketing and buildup for this film! I was very excited o see, and it was such a extreme disappointment! It had very disgusting humor, inconsistent plot and illogical decisions! the only redeeming factor is the action, new divide, and transformers. Despite that, I hate jetfire's design and devastator's too! And shamefully I saw it twice!

G.I. joe rise of cobra- same as transformers but better humor yet it's inconsistent. Way too scifi, and it's need to be more war themed. And lastly the joes are all AMERICAN!!! I'm not bein a racist but it's the way it always has been. Just like transformers 2, I saw this film twice!

Mission Impossible: Ghost Protocol- a stupid Tom cruise flick. He just shows off how cool he thinks he is. The best part was seeing him get his leg broken by a 60 year old man. I 

Lincoln- a deceitful film about politics not his life! It should have been titled "the politics of Lincoln" or "political life of Lincoln". I was expecting a film that is titled "Lincoln" to be about Lincoln.

Planes fire and rescue- a lazy written sequel to "Planes". It has the awesome Ed Harris and Hal Holbrook but it suffers from being the same kin of story I'm sure most of us have heard or seen before.

Bourne 4- a cliched spy action film that a has plot elements and action ripped from other films.

Hotel Transylvania 2-I really didn't plan on seeing this . The 2/3 of the film was actually really interesting and some jokes were way better. But then it becomes disappointing payoff.

A Christian short story: Part one

It was a dark and raining night in the city. The alleys were empty, for the homeless took shelter elsewhere. 

"That's good," thought a 16 year old teen that was heading there.

The teen's name was Ella smark, and she was a beatiful heavy girl with short black hair and bluish green eyes. Ella was wearing a coral lavender zipper up half top and dark violet skirt with a heavily drenched dark navy windbreaker coat. She was a very depressed teen with [what she believes] a very screwed up life that cannot be redeemed. On this night she planned to take her own life. How you ask? With her dad's family heirloom .38 revolver. She has never fired a gun before. But to her it seemed better than jumping off a bridge or through a window. 

Ella pulled out the revolver and pulled back the hammer. She was very frightened but felt there was no alternative. She held the gun to her head. As she did, flashes of her life passed through her in milliseconds. Tears welled up in her eyes and fell down her cheeks. She closed  her eyes. Ready to pull the trigger.

Unbeknownst to her, a tall mysterious stranger wearing a fedora and trench coat and with an umbrella was following her. The stranger wondered what a young girl was doing at this hour in the rain.

The stranger saw what she was about to do and folded up the umbrella and smacked her on the head but probably a little too hard. The girl fell down. 

The stranger pulled off the fedora revealing a Indian American in his mid 40s with black hair, goatee, and blue violet eyes. The man's name is Rohan Kamdar. He put the umbrella inside his coat and picked up the girl and took her to his suv. He planned to take her to his home and care for her.

He laid her in the back seat and then drove off out of the city, past the suburbs and into the country...

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On the way his phone went off. It was Rohan's wife, a brunette Caucasian named Hannah.

Rohan answered the phone 

"Hi honey!"

"Hey hubby, where are you?" 

"On my way home. Sorry I didn't get back sooner. Something happened. I just prevented a girl from committing suicide."

"Oh my god."

"Please don't say that."

"Sorry. Are you alright? Is she alright?"

"Yes. I actually knocked her out and I'm taking her to our home so I can talk to her. Could you prepare a bed for her in our spare bedroom?"

"Of course. Are you sure about taking her into our home? Especially since she tried to kill herself?"

"No. But I need to talk to her. She needs someone to talk to."

"I understand. How soon can you be home?"

"In fifteen minutes."

"Ok see you soon. I love you Rohan."

"I love you too Hannah."

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After 90 minutes of driving through downpours, Rohan pulled up into his yard, a 6 acre yard in the forest with a ranch atrium house on a hill. He took the girl out of his car and into the house. Hannah waited for him inside and greeted him with a kiss. 

"How is she?"

"Still knocked out. I hit her a little too hard. Is the guest room ready?" 

"Yes it is. Do you need anything?"

"A glass of water please. All I've had today is soda and Gatorade."

"And a glass of milk too? You need to keep your bones strong especially at your age."

"Sounds good."

He brought the girl to the guest room in the back where all the bedrooms were.

The bed which was a light blue, had the sheets pulled back. Rohan laid the girl onto the bed and pulled the sheets over her and blessed her. And he left the room and grabbed his water and milk and drank them and then went to bed with his wife. And prayed to help the girl, who ever she was and what ever ailed her.

He put on his pajamas and then went to bed and fell asleep.

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